Let the Bells Ring!

I write on a night of celebration! First, another milestone: this is our 200th post on this blog. I extend heartfelt thanks to all those who have marched with me on this journey — and onward we go, by grace!

Second, at a few minutes before 9:00 p.m. tonight, August 22, 2013, I finished the first draft of Signs and Shadows, which I began on April 22, 2010 in Niigata, Japan, when the book was called The House of the Worm. How well I remember that day! I took a small Moleskine notebook and sat in the McDonald’s at the Dekky shopping center, jotting down ideas for the book inspired by my visit to the Winchester Mystery House. (You can read my entry on that intriguing place in San Jose here.)

Working outdoors on the back porch, I wrote 3,231 words today, bringing the book’s raw word count to 159,192. I wrote the last stretch this evening with lightning flashing, thunder growling, and rain falling beyond the shelter of the roof — elementally appropriate! Today was the fifth-most productive day (considering only words written) in the history of this book. I am deeply grateful to God and to (and for) my wonderfully supportive wife — who cooked for us both today, who always celebrates progress with me, and who posted the fact of the draft’s completion on Facebook almost the moment I finished it! (And I’d like to thank my AlphaSmart Neo, too — what a faithful and fantastic machine!)

Some tweaking will be required, of course, to smooth the tangles and iron out the continuity errors. And I’m sure there are too many words. But editing, generally speaking, is fun. It’s a great day — glory to God!

In the odds and ends category . . . (You can decide whether this is an odd or an end.) Not long ago, Morwenna was telling me that in The Phantom Tollbooth, mention is made of edible punctuation marks. As is usually the case, I haven’t read the book (though I’ve heard great things about it many times), and I didn’t rush off to find a copy and start reading (though I would, in a perfect world). What I did was to start imagining what I’d do with that idea if I were writing about it. Here are some sentences I came up with. And my apologies to the author who first thought up the idea of edible punctuation, especially if I’ve inadvertently stolen any material. (Thanks, Morwenna, for starting the conversation!)

You have to imagine that characters are sitting around eating edible punctuation marks, which I suppose would have varying degrees of saltiness and spice. A period, for example, would taste about like a regular cracker; an exclamation point would be either red-hot or garlicky, depending on its proximity to the equator.

1. Jonathan, munching on a comma, paused slightly before continuing his narrative.

2. Having devoured three points of ellipsis with great relish, Catherine let her words trail off, and she appeared to be lost in thought.

3. Popping an ampersand into his mouth, Robert leaned close to his companions, enjoying the company.

4. Amelia crunched on the sugary colon and looked intently from face to face until she had everyone’s attention for what she was about to disclose.

5. Speaking through his mouthful of parentheses, Edwin delivered one of his oblique anecdotes that added nothing to the main thrust of his thesis.

That’s all for now. Did you see the full moon on Tuesday night? It was a blue moon — our second full moon this month. And it was visible coming and going: big and orange low in the east at dusk, still brightly shining in the west as dawn approached. (It’s a fair guess it was visible most of the while between those times, too.)

This is still summer! Let’s live accordingly!

 

40 Responses to Let the Bells Ring!

  1. Shieldmaiden says:

    Congratulations Fred! I am so happy you have finished it. I remember the day you started it. Things are sure different for you at the end of writing Signs and Shadows (THOTW) than at the beginning, aren’t they? I am very happy for you! Congratulations again.
    p.s. I love the title!

  2. Marquee Movies says:

    Congratulations, Fred! We are all so excited about the prospect of a new book, and to know that it was inspired by the Mystery House on the west coast makes it even more exciting to think about! Norton Juster is the author of The Phantom Tollbooth – a treasured story. In Dictionopolis, some characters have been invited to dine with the king, and as they all climb into a cart, Milo, the hero, sees no horses, and asks, “How does it go?” Someone puts a finger to his lips, saying, “It goes without saying.” When there is silence, the cart begins moving towards the castle.
    The market scene is a lot of fun, as people sell and eat letters as well. One line I remember had a man take a big bite out of an A, and let “…the juice run down his chin.”
    I love your punctuation lines! Here’s one that’s a bit PG –
    “Shirley, sitting next to her high school boyfriend, reached into the bowl, and upon finding a period, sighed with relief, and bit into it happily.”

  3. Jedibabe says:

    Congratulations on the completion of your latest book! I have to say I was surprised my dear friend Shieldmaiden didn’t comment on the “sugary colon”, as she always sees visuals for such comments, especially when they involve a homonym for an organ of the digestive system! It did make me laugh and it was fun to recall The Phantom Tollbooth, which I didn’t discover until I was teaching school. Have fun editing and I look forward to enjoying your latest book-child!

  4. fsdthreshold says:

    This is a test message for Shieldmaiden. We’re still trying to get her notifications figured out. Are you receiving this, Shieldmaiden?

    • Shieldmaiden says:

      Thanks for trying. I didn’t get a notice by email for this comment. There is a box that says: “Check here to Subscribe to notifications for new posts” that always notified me when anyone commented on a post I’d commented on (on the old blog) as long as I’d checked the box. I have checked the box on this blog but haven’t gotten notices.

      Does anyone else get them?

  5. How wonderful to hear from Marquee Movies and Jedibabe, as well as the avatar-challenged Shieldmaiden, all on the same post. Scott popped in, too, so if we can just get Hagio, Daylily, Morwenna and jhagman here all the old ‘regulars’ will have stopped by! Oh happy day! Maybe Peter Anne will make her first visit!

  6. Daylily says:

    Congratulations, Fred, on finishing the book! Very exciting! Your clever punctuation sentences remind me of the “Tom Swifties” word game my family of origin used to play. Examples: 1) “Your hair is tangled,” snarled Tom. 2) “He’s losing his hair,” said Tom baldly. 3) “Pass the knife,” said Tom sharply. Oh, Shieldmaiden and others might enjoy using Blogtrottr. The service emails all the comments on the blog to my inbox, as well as a notification regarding any new blog posts.

    • Shieldmaiden says:

      Hi Daylily,
      I am now getting Blogtrottr notices about the new blog posts, but still nothing when anyone comments. I clicked on ‘manage subscription’ and looked, but couldn’t find anything to request comment notifications. Any ideas?

      • Daylily says:

        Try this. Go to your “manage subscription” page and unsubscribe to Fred’s blog. Then press “subscribe to a new feed.” Put fredericsdurbin.com into the URL box. Press “feed me.” The next page should give you a list of two or three feeds. The second one is the one you want. The feed is entitled “Comments for Frederic S. Durbin.” (You really don’t need to subscribe to the first feed; you can already get notifications of Fred’s new posts through his blog.)

        • Shieldmaiden says:

          Okay, I did all that. I think I clicked on the first one last time, thinking they were all to the same blog. Now, I’ve clicked the second one, that says, “comments” and when I did, it spit me back into multiple options for that address. I re-selected the second option, twice, so hopefully it works. We shall see.

          Thank you so, so much for walking my technically challenged self though this process. You rock girly!

        • Shieldmaiden says:

          Hi Daylily,
          Are you having issues with Blogtottr, or just me? It worked perfectly the first day, then the other night, instead of sending me hourly notices of new posts it sent me all the comments of the day in one giant batch in the middle of the night. Since then I haven’t gotten anything from them even though comments are being made. I deleted my subscription and resigned up like you told me to and still nothing. Any ideas.
          p.s. if you want to email me directly I’ll be happy to send it to you. Or we could just keep meeting here haha.

          • Daylily says:

            Yes, how about if you get my email address from Fred and email me directly? And we’ll work on it.

  7. Morwenna says:

    Big congratulations on finishing Signs and Shadows, Fred! That’s such exciting news.

    The edible punctuation marks in The Phantom Tollbooth are simply described as “a box of sugar-coated periods, commas, and exclamation points.” There isn’t anything in the story about the results of eating them (that fun idea is your own).

    Readers do learn to avoid eating square meals. We’re told that these “steaming squares of all sizes and colors” taste “awful.”

  8. Marquee Movies says:

    Hmm…I confess I’m a bit surprised that this literary group didn’t leap on Fred’s very fun exercise. Here’s a few more of mine, dedicated to members of the Fred Poets Society.
    “Richard ate part of his cheddar-flavored dash, then, after looking around to make sure everyone was watching, ate the rest of it.”
    “By now, everyone in the group had learned to cover their ears when Steven ate his crispy exclamation points, because of his obnoxiously loud chewing.”
    “Julie wasn’t sure if she liked her sundried tomato question mark or not.”
    “Rick once again brought a caret cake for the Fred Poets Society meeting.”
    “Maria ate exactly half of her freshly baked percent sign.”
    And then this exchange between two members of the FPS:
    “Erik, I LOVE these cheese curd quotation marks that you’ve been talking about for months, and I love you for bringing them!”
    “Ditto.”

    • fsdthreshold says:

      Marquee Movies, these are brilliant! Fantastic stuff here!

      “As she recounted her trip to Chicago, Evangeline contemplated the asterisk she’d just pulled out of the toasty bag. It had such an alluring aroma! Suddenly she remembered the notebook tucked away in her satchel, determined to share with everyone the story she’d jotted down concerning the city’s ghostly history.”

  9. fsdthreshold says:

    And thanks to Daylily for the information about blogtrottr! That does sound like your best solution, Shieldmaiden!

    • Shieldmaiden says:

      It does, but I am so non-techy that I don’t know what a URL is. So I’ll have to enlist someones assistance in blogtrottring, but will get it figured out. Thanks for all the help Fred and Daylily and everyone.

      • Daylily says:

        Hi, Shieldmaiden! The URL is the address for the blog you want to follow. Try copying and pasting this into the URL space on the online form: http://www.fredericsdurbin.com

        This from Blogtrottr help page: What if I don’t know the exact feed URL?
        Not to worry, we’ll autodetect any available feeds from a website URL, and present you with a list you can choose from.

          • Shieldmaiden says:

            Okay, they just sent me a confirmation, so I think it works! Thanks so much Daylily!!
            And Fred, could you please link my icons so I only have the green one? Thank you.

          • Daylily says:

            You’re welcome, Shieldmaiden! I thought that both you and others of the FOB could use the information. I myself have found it pleasant to have all the comments delivered to my inbox, so I don’t miss anything! (Particularly if someone comments on an old post of Fred’s, where one would not think to look for new comments.)

          • Shieldmaiden says:

            Daylily, I think I did something wrong because I am still only getting direct reply notices. I got this one, but none of Fred’s new comments at the bottom came in, but I will keep trying.

        • Shieldmaiden says:

          They are the ones I’ve always gotten from Fred’s blog. I have only gotten the confirmation from Blogtrottr but no notices from them yet.

          • Daylily says:

            Oh, then as long as you signed up for fredericsdurbin.com, you’re fine. I think you just have to wait a bit for the service to start working.

  10. fsdthreshold says:

    Shieldmaiden: I assume your non-green avatar appears when you are logging in using your less common e-mail address? If that’s not the case, I don’t think I can correct the problem. If that IS the case — if you’re getting the bad icon when you log in with a different address (presumably your one that begins with a number), then if you’ll actually register a second time on my blog, I can get it hooked up with the same green avatar. But you’ll have to first register on my blog like you did the first time. You’ll probably have to call yourself something slightly different, so the system thinks you’re a different person. One character difference would be enough. And be careful not to un-register your primary identity — leave that one in place! Does that make sense? You’ll essentially be two different people who have the same green avatar. That’s what we’re doing for Mr. Brown Snowflake, who has two addresses he frequently uses.

  11. fsdthreshold says:

    Clarification: your new, second identity will use the lesser of your two e-mail addresses. Is it clear what I’m asking? 🙂

    • Shieldmaiden says:

      I have only used my numberless one, but I think your webmaster set me up originally and may have linked my other one in (since that’s the one I used on the old blog). I have only used the one with my name on this blog. When I sign in I get the green avatar and if I don’t sign in I get the purple one. If you can help me sign both in that would be great. If not, at least I tried. A LOT. The notices are still not happening either, but I will keep trying on that too.

  12. Shieldmaiden says:

    Fred, sorry all the blog talk has overtaken the glorious news of your book completion on this post. I am still celebrating however, even while trying to get all this figured out 🙂

    • Hagiograph says:

      Fred, definitely congrats! Best of luck with the remaining steps to publication!

      As for the whole URL and blog discussion I assume that Fred will use all this for his next book: “Blogosphere” in which the heroine, a young 12 year old girl gets lost in the offices of a HAUNTED ISP pursued by The evil KARL von ICAAN and who ultimately meets up with a handsome young Timmy “Burners” Leigh, a fey british paladin who saves her by casting her fortune using the mystical “HTML” tetragrammaton of power.

      JEEZ Fred, I keep feeding you the BEST IDEAS FOR BOOKS! I mean when am I going to see some of that sweet author-scratch you must have in a giant swimming pool full of golden coins????

  13. Shieldmaiden says:

    Let the bells ring indeed! My comment notifications are working at long last, thanks to Daylily! So thrilled.

    Now back to our regularly scheduled programming…

  14. Daylily says:

    Hi, Shieldmaiden! I am glad I could help. I am not a trained computer technician, but persistence is one of my best (and also worst) traits. 🙂

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