Ray Bradbury

As most of you know, the Grand Old Man of Science-Fiction and Fantasy, Ray Bradbury, passed away this past week. Very few writers have had such an impact on these genres as Mr. Bradbury. Bios and tributes abound, so I won’t attempt anything like that here. I’d just like to tell you a few of the ways his writing has touched my life as a reader and writer, and maybe, in his honor, we can all share some of our Bradbury memories.

Ray Bradbury was one of the last writers who had been around since the pulp era. He systematically cranked out stories in the fifties, back when you could make a living selling short stories. He reported (in Zen in the Art of Writing) how he would write a story every week. On Monday, he’d churn out the rough draft. On Tuesday, he’d revise it. On Wednesday, he’d do a third draft. By the end of the week, he’d send it off and be ready to start over the following week. Pretty amazing, huh?

I’ve always felt a kinship with Bradbury. We’re both Illinois boys from small towns. His was farther north than mine, but in the same state, and he seems to have found many of the same things magical and wondrous that I do. A friend in Japan once commented that, in our writing, Bradbury and I “move the camera” the same way. I think I would agree, for the most part. Lest you think that’s a pretty grandiose claim, I want to be clear that that style is not always entirely a good thing. Read my early work, and then read Bradbury’s The Halloween Tree. We both need precisely the same type of editing. We get carried away at just the same points.

But anyway, Bradbury memories:

1. Probably my earliest is receiving a wonderful boxed set of Bradbury paperbacks from my parents one Christmas. It’s right here on my shelf now: The Best of Bradbury. It includes Dandelion Wine, Fahrenheit 451, The Illustrated Man, The Golden Apples of the Sun, and Long After Midnight. What a box of jewels! It’s much-yellowed now with age and my parents’ cigarette smoke, but that only gives it more weight of treasured history. These books were my first exposure to Ray Bradbury, except for:

2. The Martian Chronicles. This was my first first exposure, which is what clued my parents in to the fact that I would enjoy the boxed set. I remember reading The Martian Chronicles in the open doorway of our barn’s hayloft, sitting there on those worn boards in a pool of westering sunlight. My bare feet were either crossed or dangling over the edge of the drop down to the ground a story below. This book transported me to Mars. It’s sad, wistful, poignant, and bursting with invention — truly among a great writer’s greatest works.

3. Something Wicked This Way Comes. In retrospect, this delightful book was a huge and direct influence on my Dragonfly. If you want to see how our styles and senses of the numinous are similar, there’s no better place to look than this slim book. It opened my eyes and made me, as a pre-teen or teen, think, “Yeah! These things I love to fear, these things I dream about — these could make a book!”

4. Zen in the Art of Writing. I found this slender volume in Kinokuniya Bookstore in Tokyo, and it’s probably the latest thing I’ve read by Bradbury (except for “The Scythe” in The October Country, which a friend insisted I read after I came to Pittsburgh; she literally sat me down in a chair and made me read the story from beginning to end. Yes, it’s a very good one!) But, back to Zen. I think this book is cobbled together largely (entirely?) from Bradbury’s forewords and introductions to some of his other books. I’m not sure. At any rate, it’s well worth reading if you’re a creative artist of any kind, or if you’re a fan of Bradbury’s, or if you’re a fan of books. The main connection to Zen is that he talks about bending the bow in traditional Japanese archery. Before ever setting an arrow onto the string, novices of kyuudou practice holding the bow and drawing back the string. They do this again and again, learning the tension of the wood, internalizing the feel of it. When, long afterward, they do start adding the arrow, they no longer have to think about the bow. So it is with writing. A writer writes and writes, so that eventually the “muscles” are there; the technique of putting thoughts effectively into words is an unconscious act, like breathing. At that point, when ideas (the arrows) come, the bow is ready for them. I love how Bradbury advises writers not to think so much when they write! But that’s true. Thinking gets in the way. When the real writing is pouring out, we’re not thinking at all.

In this book, Bradbury talks about a method he used that allowed him to generate so many stories on a regular basis. I’m paraphrasing here, but he said he would simply brainstorm lists of nouns that seemed interesting to him — things that triggered childhood associations, tickled fears or fancies — things that seemed they might have stories lurking somewhere within them. He would make a list such as: The Road. The Oak Tree. The Thunderstorm. The Old Man. The Basement . . . stuff like that. Then, when he set out to write a story, he would have no plot in mind, no characters, no idea whatsoever for how it was going to take shape. He would choose one of his nouns from his list and just start writing a description of it — not a story, just a description. After a page or two, a story would usually begin to insinuate itself into the words. Pretty soon, he would know what the story was and who the characters were and what was happening to them. He’d abandon the description and start writing the story.

I can honestly say that I used this technique once, and it worked like a charm. I started with one idea: The Barn. I had nothing beyond that, but I started writing a description of that place we played when we were kids. Just as Bradbury said, after a page or two of description, I found the story . . . or it found me. A ghost horse found me, and the story became “Star,” which Cricket accepted outright, with no requests for revision other than the usual line-edits. Cricket even reprinted this story last year, a good decade after its first appearance, and a new generation of readers thinks it’s a new story! What are the lines by The Rolling Stones? — “It is the evening of the day; / I sit and watch the children play, / Doin’ things we used to do / They think are new.” (I can also honestly say that I think I tried the method a second time, and I couldn’t get it to work. So it may not always yield a story, but I’ll bet it would more often than not.)

I believe the secret of this method is that the list of nouns comes from your subconscious, or your early-conscious (childhood) mind. (That reliance on childhood memories is a huge part of how I “move the camera” in the same way as Bradbury. I don’t think I’d have any material — or at least, it wouldn’t have life and fire — without my early childhood impressions.) When you reach into your magic treasure-box, you find the components of stories.

5. Did anyone use to watch Bradbury Theater on TV, which presented dramatized versions of some of his short stories? Ray would introduce each episode himself. I will never forget the story in which Peter O’Toole plays a roguish, playboy movie producer who has gone a little too far in a lifetime of ill-using women. In a woodland cottage at night, he has a run-in with the scariest banshee you’ll find anywhere.

6. In Zen, Bradbury shares the memory of fire balloons. He was a child some years before I was a child, and apparently in his childhood, people still sent up fire balloons on summer nights. These involved some kind of bag beneath which a lit candle was suspended. The hot air would make the contraption rise, and it would flicker and glow as it drifted higher and higher. Well, I’d all but forgotten this bit of Americana, but just a few days before Bradbury’s passing, I was at some friends’ house on a Saturday night, and we had a pleasant fire in the backyard beneath the maple trees. Someone said, “Look! There’s a fire balloon!” Sure enough, floating above the Pittsburgh neighborhood was a faery light, a silent, luminous emissary of early summer. We watched it until it rose so high it essentially became a star.

Who nowadays lights fire balloons? Who has even heard of them? I hadn’t, until I read Bradbury. Wouldn’t it be fun to think that that mysterious balloon I saw on a June night really wasn’t sent up by anyone living? What if, in neighborhoods all across America, all during the past week, those balloons have been rising around us, so quiet and small that the only people who’ve seen them are those out under the trees, watching for fireflies and shooting stars, gently talking and welcoming the summer? Maybe that winking candle was one tiny part of the light that came into the world with Ray, gone up now to take its part in the firmament. Who knows? It’s possible, as Midsummer’s Eve approaches!

I’m almost certainly forgetting something important that I wanted to write about, but those are my memories of how Ray Bradbury, the writer, has intersected my life and left it richer.

Does anyone else have a story to tell? When, where, or how did you encounter the amazing R.B.? No thought or impression is too small! Let’s celebrate and honor this giant who blessed us with his tales!

22 Responses to Ray Bradbury

  1. Marquee Movies says:

    Really nice stories, Fred! Some fire balloons were sent up at our cottage last summer, and they looked beautiful rising into the sky. Reminds me of that overwhelming scene in Tangled, one of Disney’s best films ever. And I liked your describing writing as “moving the camera.” Martin Scorsese once described directing a movie as answering questions and making decisions ALL day long. When asked what the most important question of all was, he said, “Where do you put the camera?” Seemingly simple, we don’t think about it, but for every single shot of every single movie, someone had to decide where to put the camera, how to aim it, where and how to move it, how quickly or slowly, etc. I saw the tail end of an Elvis film last night, and sadly the camera was placed so far away for much of the last song that you couldn’t even tell Elvis was there singing. What you do with the camera (the storytelling) is often just as important as the story itself.

    • fsdthreshold says:

      I’m reminded of the year I worked at a business college in Niigata. As a final project, the students wrote and acted in their own video, which we teachers videotaped and edited. My friend and colleague was teaching the accelerated group, and I was teaching the “B” group. My friend had no background in film-making, so she mounted the camera on its tripod and left it running. I had grown up making 8mm movies, so I carried it on my shoulder and actually planned shots, changing angles, etc. My friend said the B group’s finished video made the A group’s “look sick.” It certainly wasn’t because of the English or the acting. Yes — what you do with the camera is important. 🙂

  2. Hagiograph says:

    For my money Bradbury could have written Dandelion Wine and have been done with a great career. Easily one of the best “summer” books out there in the world.

    As for “fire balloons” I believe the reason these are not more common is because it’s a *&^%in’ massive FIRE HAZARD. Why not just fire bottle rockets at the nieghbor’s house? Or just throw lit matches into the breeze.

    I’ve lost my taste for silly activities with fire. Could come from living in SoCal where just a few years ago a major raging wildfire came within a couple miles of our home and destroyed the homes of some of my coworkers.

    As the great philosopher Frankenstein said: “Fire baaaaaad” (and of course “Bread gooooooood”)

    • fsdthreshold says:

      That was exactly my reaction when I read about fire balloons in Bradbury’s book. You launch open flames into the air? Suspended from a balloon? Over a neighborhood?! The government fussed and fumed enough over our fireworks when we were kids. They would never go for setting candles adrift over the town. Perhaps we could improve the design by using bigger, helium-filled balloons, and then adding bottles filled with gasoline and outfitted with fuses. The fuse would be long enough that the balloon could carry the bottle away from one’s own property. After the bursting or deflation of the balloon, the bottle would drop and explode on impact with a rooftop, vehicle, porch, field, etc. Ah, the nostalgia of a small Illinois town on a summer night, with the blooms of fire sprouting up far and near, the lively chorus of voices screaming, the fellowship of impromptu bucket brigades . . .

      • fsdthreshold says:

        By the way, were you there on the Fourth of July that time we set the edge of the field on fire? (Of course you were there! When were we not together and blowing things up on the Fourth?) I’m trying to remember exactly what happened. As I recall, we had been launching bottle rockets, and then there was a smoldering and a curtain of smoke out in the raspberry patch, and we realized that a fire was spreading through the garden. There was a charge of kids and adults, and much stamping and beating, and we got the flames arrested before they spread into the field. I know it happened, but I’m not sure how it computes seasonally. The Fourth falls in a lush, green season. What was burning, and why were we worried about the fire spreading into the field? Or were we more worried about the barn? Are your memories of this incident clearer?

      • Hagiograph says:

        I have the most vague of memories of this event. It must have been the 4th. You and your parents made a pilgramage each year before the 4th to get more and wonderful fireworks from Missouri as I recall and would come back with your incendiary bounty and we’d all gather at your house and set the roadway and world ablaze.

        My most terrifying memory of the 4th was in Charleston, a year or two after the neighbor’s house burned to the ground. My folks had moved back to T-ville and I had a summer on my own knocking around the Charleston house with no supervision before I started college in the fall. That 4th some friends came over with some fireworks which we proceeded to fire off in the backyard. One went sailing back into the deep dark woods behind the house (the place with the tiny old 19th century cemetary buried deep within it), which I was afraid was going to light the woods on fire, but then someone in the coterie fired off a bottle rocket which tipped and went STRAIGHT INTO THE WALL of the neighbor’s house that had burned down 2 years before and been rebuilt.

        I decided then I was too much of a wuss to continue on with this tradition. So we stopped.

  3. Morwenna says:

    Bradbury had a gift for blending different emotional tones. For example, even the very grim “There Will Come Soft Rains” offers fanciful, funny swarms of robotic housecleaning mice.

  4. jhagman says:

    I got to work with Bradbury’s daughter Ramona at Borders #118, Thousand Oaks. She is every inch a Bradbury. An old fashioned bookseller, once she got to know you she would tell you stories about growing up surrounded by books, writers and props. I once asked her about Forrest J. Ackerman, she started with “Uncle Fory”! What a trip.

  5. Buurenaar says:

    We didn’t do…well…miniature hot air balloons with fuel, but paper lantern balloons fueled by candles are pretty common for prom in SC. Also, it’s sometimes a thing at funerals down here, even if it’s a single lantern sent up.
    As for Bradbury, I read a little, watched a little, and it was all under my dad’s influence. Actually, when I was begging him to let me read Dragonfly to him, I did use the word “Bradbury-esque”…or rather, non-word. The fact that I used that descriptive piqued his interest more than anything else. He also agreed with me.
    Also, Scott and Hagiograph, felons can be sources for some of the best story ideas. They see things differently…and I see enough of them down South. It all depends on their type, though.
    Also, for a little (okay, gigantic) story I want to write, I need a general history of writing over the world, ranging from the first known Sumerian alphabets to the last century. Things such as the year of the Lascaux cave paintings–I believe that’s spelled correctly–would also be highly useful. Does anybody have a suggestion for such a timeline?

  6. jhagman says:

    Buur, for a history of the alphabet check out the works of David Diringer, he is very fun, and his work erudite and informed. He goes into detail about the differences between pictographic systems (like Sumerian Cuneiform) and phonetic systems of writing (alphabets), a scholar like Diringer shows you how much joy can be had from learning.

  7. Hey Fred … nyuk nyuk nyuk … its Taco Gringo for me Thurs-Fri-Sat! nyuk nyuk nyuk (and, of course, a stop at that little nugget of culinary delight, Bill’s Toasty Shop, will DEFINITELY be on the agenda as well)

    • fsdthreshold says:

      Excellent! I am excited for you just thinking about it! Remember me when you bite into those leathery taco shells (not unlike dinosaur eggs), and the red oil spurts!

      And everyone, Happy Midsummer’s Eve! Listen for Elvish singing outside your window tonight. Linger at the window just before you go to bed. See if one single leaf is stirring on the dark, silent tree or bush within your view. If so, a pixie may have just flitted from it. It’s the dark of the moon tonight, which would seem to make it a special Midsummer’s Eve — lots of cover for mysterious goings-on to go on.

      • Hagiograph says:

        Apparently the majority of the country of Finland shuts down for Midsummers Weekend. I just heard from my cohort in Lohja Finland that her workplace was emptying out as Finns took the long weekend. And isn’t it strange that midsummer is so close to official astronomical start of summer?

        • fsdthreshold says:

          Well, we call it the beginning of summer, but since it’s the time when the daylight is at its very longest, it would seem to be the height of something, wouldn’t it? The “mid-” seems appropriate in that light. Now the days are getting shorter again. Fortunately, they have a long, long way to go until winter!

          However, I’m all for considering this to be the beginning of summer. Maybe it would help to think of “Midsummer’s Eve” as “an evening amid the summer.”

  8. jhagman says:

    1 mile away from me is the Mexican Joint “Mi Ranchito”. I had Birria and Pastor tacos, $1.50 each, loaded with onions and cilantro, yum!

    • Hagiograph says:

      Are you anywhere near Carson, CA, Jhagman? If so have you tried Diana’s? That place was underwhelming in appearance but extremely good. My wife, when she was doing her stint at the BP refinery in Carson ate there often and still drags me there everytime we go to the LA area.

      Real authentic mexican food served with absolutely no frills.

    • fsdthreshold says:

      That does indeed sound very good! I’ve never even heard of “Pastor tacos.” It sounds quite Protestant!

  9. jhagman says:

    Fred “al pastor” is marinated pork, it is el yummy. Hagio- your Diana’s sounds very intriguing. I live in the Antelope Valley, and sometimes when we’re driving through LA we see those refinerys, so I’ll make a stop, and check it out, it should be fun. Now if this suggestion were coming from From Mr. Brown I would be looking for a culinary angle-joke-trap. He would make an interesting DM.

  10. Buurenaar says:

    Jhagman, thank you for the information! I’ve been trying to get a good time line of world events and the history of the spoken/written languages of the world for the base of this particular tale. It’s gigantic, though, and I’m worried that my skills aren’t up to par for proper execution of the idea.

    Mmmm…tacos al pastor. Been a while since I’ve heard that particular a la mode phrase. I’m hungry now.

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